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Photography Challenge::Gallery :: Challenges :: February 4th 2008 - Childhood :: jacks
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Hey you stole my idea, or did I steal yours? I was logging in to upload my shot when I saw yours, I thought about changing but I figured nobody else gets the luxury to see what others submit, so I couldn't change mine. Anyway, this is a nice idea, especially since I thought of it . I kind of wish the dof wasn't so shallow, the only jack that seems to be in focus is the one on the left, either focus on a different one, like the one in the middle, or get a larger dof so everything is in focus. I really like all the colors, that makes the picture stand out more.
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This shot would have been nice on a white surface to make the colors really pop. Also watch the focus and DOF. I really can't find anything in focus here to be the main subject of the photo. Also the lighting is yellow. Watch the white balance.
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I like your concept, but I'm not sure where the focus is supposed to be. Composition might have a little more impact if there was a bit less foreground showing. I'd like to see this with a bit more contrast and maybe in B&W. Really cool idea - funny how there's two shots of Jacks!!
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I really liked that Travis had a dark surface since his jacks were light colored. So with yours being all colorful, a white surface would have been awesome!! I really do like the angle though!
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I love the color variety in this picture. I also like how there is one pink jack sitting in the middle that seems to be surrounded by all of the others. I like the reflections showing off of the floor.
Just one question, did you leave them there so Jeff could step on them? Ha ha...
Just one question, did you leave them there so Jeff could step on them? Ha ha...
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I actually think the table or floor takes away from the shot. I think it would improve it to have them on something plain, maybe a white piece of paper. I do have to agree that some of them are out of focus, and would be better if they were all in focus, or one in focus and the others not. I do like where you placed your ball and the colors of the ball.
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