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Post  travis_cooper

Hey you stole my idea, or did I steal yours? I was logging in to upload my shot when I saw yours, I thought about changing but I figured nobody else gets the luxury to see what others submit, so I couldn't change mine. Anyway, this is a nice idea, especially since I thought of it Very Happy . I kind of wish the dof wasn't so shallow, the only jack that seems to be in focus is the one on the left, either focus on a different one, like the one in the middle, or get a larger dof so everything is in focus. I really like all the colors, that makes the picture stand out more.
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Post  Jenluvs2scrap

This shot would have been nice on a white surface to make the colors really pop. Also watch the focus and DOF. I really can't find anything in focus here to be the main subject of the photo. Also the lighting is yellow. Watch the white balance.

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Post  FarrahJ

I like the idea, but it's OOF and has a yellowish cast.
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Post  Panache

I like your concept, but I'm not sure where the focus is supposed to be. Composition might have a little more impact if there was a bit less foreground showing. I'd like to see this with a bit more contrast and maybe in B&W. Really cool idea - funny how there's two shots of Jacks!!

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Post  shutch

I like the reflection on the table top - great job!
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Post  melissa

I really liked that Travis had a dark surface since his jacks were light colored. So with yours being all colorful, a white surface would have been awesome!! I really do like the angle though!

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Post  khutch

I love the color variety in this picture. I also like how there is one pink jack sitting in the middle that seems to be surrounded by all of the others. I like the reflections showing off of the floor.

Just one question, did you leave them there so Jeff could step on them? Ha ha... lol!
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Post  Janae_cooper

I actually think the table or floor takes away from the shot. I think it would improve it to have them on something plain, maybe a white piece of paper. I do have to agree that some of them are out of focus, and would be better if they were all in focus, or one in focus and the others not. I do like where you placed your ball and the colors of the ball.
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