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Yardwork

Post by travis_cooper on Sun Apr 20, 2008 9:58 pm

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Post by FarrahJ on Mon Apr 21, 2008 2:38 pm

Interesting...I can't help but wonder if the position of the hose would be better if it were a little different...sorry...I'm trying to keep my mind out of the gutter. =)
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Post by travis_cooper on Mon Apr 21, 2008 2:38 pm

I'm not really sure what to say on this one. It isn't a bad shot, it just doesn't hold my attention, but I'm not sure exactly why. I wonder what this would look like if we could see the water actually coming into the shot. So if we took it from a different angle, where we see the shadow, and then the water coming in and watering the lawn as well. I think that would have grabbed my attention a bit more.

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Post by travis_cooper on Mon Apr 21, 2008 2:39 pm

FarrahJ wrote:Interesting...I can't help but wonder if the position of the hose would be better if it were a little different...sorry...I'm trying to keep my mind out of the gutter. =)

I didn't even notice that until you said something. This is a good example of why mergers can be bad.

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Post by Tay Van on Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:46 pm

this shot looks a little defferent but i dont know what to look at in this pix
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Post by twazd on Thu Apr 24, 2008 6:27 am

hmmm-what they said and perhaps a different crop to get the little person out as the primary subject of the image. Although I bet it is a great memory. Very Happy

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Re: Yardwork

Post by Janae_cooper on Thu Apr 24, 2008 11:08 am

I think that turning the picture to a vertical position would have worked better. It would seem more natural. I think that having a solid background would have worked better. The patches of grass are distracting. I can imagine how great this would have looked on some rich green plush grass. I like the idea and love the sprinkler...no dirty thoughts here. Although I can see whey they think that Laughing
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