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red bird, red bird, what do you see?

Post by travis_cooper on Sun Apr 20, 2008 1:30 pm



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Post by FarrahJ on Mon Apr 21, 2008 2:38 pm

a nice shot...I would like it better if the foreground OOF tulips were absent in this shot.
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Post by travis_cooper on Mon Apr 21, 2008 2:42 pm

I think this is a good idea. I had to look at it for a bit to find the second bird. I saw the two shadows, but I could only see one bird, I thought you had two lights shining on it or something for a second. I really wish the birds were in sharper focus though, they seem soft to me. I wish that the flowers in the back were oof as well as the front ones, so the birds would stand out that much more. Nice job.

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Post by Tay Van on Mon Apr 21, 2008 5:11 pm

i like your idea but i think you could show more of the shadow and angel it up more
good job though
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Post by shutch on Mon Apr 21, 2008 6:58 pm

I love the colors in this one. I wish that the front tulips weren't there as they are a bit distracting. However, what a fabulous idea with the two birds.
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Post by Janae_cooper on Thu Apr 24, 2008 11:12 am

I like your ducks. You must shop at Target. I the ducks are not in focus but the tulips behind them are. It would have been better if the ducks were sharp and tulips were not. I think you were trying to frame the ducks with the tulips in the front. Good idea. like I said before I think the real problem lays with the fact that the ducks are OOF. I like the framing. I like the interesting shapes of the ducks, it makes a great shadow!
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Post by khutch on Thu Apr 24, 2008 5:57 pm

I have to say that this is my second favorite shot of the week. I like the flowers in the front. I also like the fact that the shadow helps you to understand the picture, by better revealing the second duck. I think it is a great shot! Good job!
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